Year 1

RHYMING POETRY
 
They scamper around
and love the sand.
The turtles eat
and they meet.
The turtles cheat
and peek at you.
 
by Martha.
 
It swigs and jigs.
It is fast
and it chases a cat.
It whistles
and it picks thistles.
It is soft
and it coughs.
It is fun
and it swum.
It swims in the sea
and it swims with me.
 
by Lara
 
The bee can fly high
in the sky.
The bumble bee has frail wings
and it stings.
The bee has wings
and it sings.
 
by Sonny
 
 
A LETTER FROM THE WOLF:
 
Dear Three Little Pigs,
I am sorry for being naughty and blowing your houses down. I will give you some money. Do you want to play with me at my house?
Love Wolf
 
By Lara
 
Dear Three Little Pigs,
I am so sorry for blowing your houses down. I can make up for it by giving you some money. I will tell you how much. I will give you £215.
Love from the Wolf
By Oskar
 
Dear Three Little Pigs
I am sorry for trying to eat you and blowing your houses down and I will build them back up and invite you for dinner and my party and I am ashamed of me and I will be your friend.
Love from the Wolf
By Sam
 
 
DESCRIBING THE WOLF
 
The wolf is scary and it is bad. The wolf has sharp teeth. The wolf is furry. The wolf is really bad.
By Keeley
 
The wolf is bad. The wolf is sneaky. The wolf is scary. The wolf has sharp teeth.
By Callum
 
DESCRIBING ONE OF THE PIGS
 
The pig is brave. He built a brick house. He is wearing a tie. The wolf tried to huff the house down.
By Harry
 
The pig is worried because the wolf is coming to blow the pig house down. The pig built his house out of sticks. The pig is scared because the wolf is coming. The pig is brave. He is wearing a tie and a shirt.
By Ollie
 
The wolf is bad. The pig is good. The pig has a hat. The wolf fell in a pot.
By Nicholas
 
The pig is brave and smart. The pig is big and nice. The pig is fat and furry.
By Sonny

 

What Can I Sense?

by Amber C.

I can see spikey trees.

I can hear sparkling river waters run.

I can taste lovely river water.

I can touch the crumbling cliffs.

I can smell slippery river fish.

 

The Beach

by Dominic

I can see the sea, it is salty.

I can hear the air, it smells beachy.

I can taste the sea, it is yuk!

I can smell beachy air.

I can hear the whisper of trees.

 

Beach Huts

by Lois

I can see the huts.

I can hear the sea.

I can taste the salty sea.

I can touch wood.

I can smell water.

 

The Beach

by Oskar

I can hear the sea crashing on the rocks.

I can see the sea.

I can taste the sea.

I can smell the trees that are fresh.

I can touch the sand - it is stony.

 

 

The Harbour

by Toby

I can see boats.

I can hear seagulls.

I can taste salmon.

I can touch harbour water.

I can smell seaweed.

 

Writing an Animal Story.

 

Tom the dog went to the woods and found a lake. The lake was warm so the dog went for a swim in the lake. The dog went to the deep end and then the dog sunk so the rescue dogs came. The end.

by Edward

 

My pet went to the theatre. He met a friend. His friend was a sheep. His friend was kind. Then he couldn’t get home because there was a big log. He had to move the log. Then it rained and a rainbow came. The end.

by Sam

 

Once upon a time a dog was chasing the cat. The cat ran to the tree. The cat was frightened. The dog was hungry. The cat jumped down. The dog followed the car down the road. The end.

by Lois

 

Once upon a time a cat went to the dark wood and saw some eyes. Dark eyes, and sleepy ran away and ran back home and her mummy and daddy were gone and the cat dressed as an old man and got a walking stick and put some glasses on and read the newspaper and sat on a bench and made a trap. Put a banana skin on the floor and the wolf tripped and saw her mummy and daddy and lived happily ever after.

by Madeleine

 

Star found the deep dark wood. It had brown trees. She found a friend, it was called Rabbit. Rabbit was lost. The trees had twigs on them. A dog came, the rabbit ran away.

by Martha

 

A LETTER FROM THE WOLF

Dear Little Red Riding Hood

I am so sorry for earing your grandma.  I am sorry for eating you.  I am sorry for tricking you.

by Joshua.

 

I am so very sorry for eating you up.  I am sorry for being mean.  I am sorry for being bad.  I will be good from now on.

by Amber.

 

I am sorry for tricking you.  I won't do it again.  I am so sorry for eating up your grandma.

by Maya.

 

I'm so sorry.  I will not eat your grandma up again.  I will not eat anybody.  I hope you will love me again.

by Mason.